Please help me use English

A bunny want some a carrot, and his found a
carrot for him. Now the bunny eats his carrot
"maaf kalau salah"

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Responsio :
When I returned home from school, I saw a cute white rabbit on the edge of the street. As it looked so hungry, I took it home with me. I gave it some carrots. I just finished my cooking class and I brought the rest of carrots with me. The rabbit was so happy and it ate the carrots happily. I decided to make it as my pet

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